Hatchet raised, about to cut, and there, the buds.
| Lifting up the hatchet, To cut it down, It was budding | nata agete kiran to sureba konome kana | 鉈あげて きらんとすれば 木の芽かな |
| Shiki | shiki | 子規 |
Translation by R. H. Blyth, Haiku, Volume Four: Autumn-Winter (1952), Preface, page vii.
鉈あげてきらんとすれば木の芽かな (nata agete kiran to sureba konome kana): hatchet raised, about to cut, and there, the buds. 鉈 is the woodsman's short heavy blade; あげてきらんとすれば is raised it and was about to cut, when, the turn inside すれば that carries a discovery; 木の芽, konome, is the tree's buds, the spring season word; かな closes on the buds and holds the arrest. It is the buds that stop the hand. In the preface to his last volume, Blyth found in it the haiku poet's tenderness of mind, shown, he said, almost too distinctly. A small verse of a young man's spring: the cut is coming, the buds are seen only now, and the verse is the stop.
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